（请无视语法）
School day is over. Dad stands near the window,smoking.
Son comes home and find his father is smoking.

lamp , camera .
it’s on!

(Son walks to his father back)
Son: what a beautiful view uhn..
DAD:yes.. really..
suddenly
dad：oh my boy!
son: what are you doing dad ? smoking?
dad:yes.. no no no … I just study on it. look, dont be faked by it’s beauty. there are lots of chemicals in it. something like nicotine.
son:so?
dad:it will make you weak and very harmful to your lung and heart!
son:OK.you made a nice study. but I still find you are smoking. and i am going to tell my mother~
dad(catch son’s hand):NO NO NO NO…dont tell your mother. listen to me, lets make a deal. what you want?
five dollars?
son:NO
dad:T-shirt?
son:No
dad:the toy card?
son:come dad. I am not a child. I am a teenager!
dad:OK. what a teenager what? …I get it! you can take your girlfriend home this weekend and I will go out with your mother. we wont come back till next day morning!so do everything you want!
son: what are you thinking dad? creepy！
dad:you dont want this? then tell me what you want?
son: OK ,this is the deal. I wont tell my mum, if you give me one.
dad:what?
son: the cigarette.
dad:what! you are smoking!
son: not really. just you second hand cigarette.
dad:oh!dear god. what i’ve done. dont you want stay your school football team any more?
son:I love it.but they quit me. they said I am unfit!
dad: how could they do that! we are football family, i FELL IN love with you mother after a football match,no one could not play football in our family!
son: so ?
dad（look at the cigarette)：so I give it up!(put the hand on son’s shoulder ）My son .I promise you and ur mother . I swear I would never somke again. trust me.
son: how kind~
dad:son
son: dad
(hug)
son and dad:I love you.

这个剧本用在省的一次优质课上，意义重大，班主任给我张贺年卡以兹鼓励。
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